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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:24 pm

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since the fields are all covered in snow and nobody can use them we could make a psa of us trying to melt the snow and we all try a different technique to try and melt it.

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Like what different techniques? And how does the video end? This pitch is way too short on details.

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:25 pm

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prom season is coming up and not everyone has dates so we can make a psa of will freaking out about how he doesnt have a prom date and goes around trying different things on how to ask girls and they keep rejecting him and then he finally gets one by being himself and showing that you don't need to go to a great extent in order to get a prom date, because i feel everyone is freaking out about how there going to ask girls/guys and how it has to be so perfect.

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Solid concept and message here if you can get the details and execution right.

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:27 pm

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On the tattoo show Tattoo cover ups people come in with the most ridiculous stories. so i could be the tattoo guy and will can come in for a cover up and we can do some random drawing in pen on his arm that says I<3Mom or something cheesy and he wants to get it covered up. as I'm tattooing him i ask him about why he wants it covered up and why he got it and it flashes back to... why he got it and his story. in his story we can she him being a mommas boy or whatever and him and his mom get into a fight leading him to me..covering up his tattoo. this is just the general idea and i would definitely like to try this but obviously it needs more.

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Tattoo Cover Up show idea: PURE GOLD

This particular story: Not the one I'd suggest going with, gotta be something with more pop that we could come up with.

But a remake of that show has phenomenally good potential.

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:28 pm

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thank you Cheetos... for getting all the cheese stuck to my hand rather then getting in my mouth.

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I like the spirit of this, but the punchline needs revision to have more impact.

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:29 pm

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will could be a physic and tells me  in the next hour "things" will be watching me all the time. So then it cuts to me in class and I'm freaking out trying to figure out what is watching me and then i think it is the chairs that are looking at me. i then start screaming at the chairs and water bottles and a bunch of random stupid things and throwing them around...then will, will walk in and only tell me he is kidding and i did all that for nothing.

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Potentially very funny. I like the possible ceiling here a lot.

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:31 pm

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i could play a target employ who is seriously annoying and loves to help costumers do there shopping. Will and nev will come into "target" and want to get some video/media/technical/film/software equipment......i would then bring them back to the "special room"...which is the telecom film room with the desk and everything. i will then show them around and just pester the crap out of them to buy items and tell them the video camera is actually a dog or something soo random. as I'm talking to them i can do a 100 year old hobo hippy voice

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Some excellent potential in here, but I'd avoid going too random with the lines, as it confuses a lot of viewers. But if you get things right here I like where this could head.

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:33 pm

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for our music video project i was looking at this video and thought we can make a very powerful video that shows a serious message to people on drugs, drinking and driving or just being safe in life.
<iframe width="420" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/dxZ2KWCi3SE" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:33 pm

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for psa my group and i can pretend to be in a band named "MHS Ruckuses".... we will be pro forming our hit song "Nonsense" and we start of with a nice sweet melody then we go into the most bizarre noises of us hitten things and screaming a bunch of random things.

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:33 pm

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the song "kiss me through the phone" by soulja boy makes me laugh whenever i here it. for a psa we could make a video of someone singing that to me on there phone and then cut it to me litterly trying to kiss them through the phone.

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:34 pm

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since there is still so much snow on the ground we can go outside and pretend to be cave man for the first time seeing snow and do a bunch of weird movements and noises

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:34 pm

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if we could do a psa like this video it be funny<iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/-5zSEJMNYhE" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:35 pm

Cbertone4 wrote:
thank you... ice cream for not being actually covered in ice and being so sweet and smooth and creamy and delicious that taste so good and melts in your mouth and making me come back for more and blowing all my money on you.. seriously thank you ice cream

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PostSubject: Re: Chris Bertone pitch thread   Sun Apr 05, 2015 9:40 pm

You are done with homework pitches. Congratulations. Feel free to produce some of your accumulated ideas in your final term of Telecom 1. You are welcome to continue posting on your pitch thread as a place to keep ideas you don't want to lose track of, but they will no longer be scored from this point forward.


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